tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8347137515649920219.post8706682475699548076..comments2014-02-07T06:30:36.231-08:00Comments on The Path to Publication: Chapter 2 - RemixSpinningJennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03565793575782127375noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8347137515649920219.post-12635050587493161932011-07-05T19:21:07.452-07:002011-07-05T19:21:07.452-07:00Thank you! That is excellent feedback, and I can&#...Thank you! That is excellent feedback, and I can't tell you how much I appreciate it. I'll add back in that bit about Gabe's dad stepping on his pride - I think that's something important. Thank you again! =)SpinningJennihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03565793575782127375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8347137515649920219.post-50441570788279088992011-07-05T14:39:29.523-07:002011-07-05T14:39:29.523-07:00I enjoyed the further development of details in fi...I enjoyed the further development of details in finding Maurice's tomb. I like the development of Gabe's moral dilemma and unspoken conflict with his father. I also liked the sense from the first version that Gabe felt as if his dad had stepped on his pride, I think that is something most guys can relate to in some way. Gabe's nerves in addressing Jade are great. I am enjoying your story very much!Justin A.noreply@blogger.com