tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8347137515649920219.post3819199841187879714..comments2014-02-07T06:30:36.231-08:00Comments on The Path to Publication: A Mouth Full of Teeth (Ch.1)SpinningJennihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03565793575782127375noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8347137515649920219.post-29332077014655785982011-04-18T18:42:12.485-07:002011-04-18T18:42:12.485-07:00Thanks! I'm glad it caught your interest. And ...Thanks! I'm glad it caught your interest. And you wont be disappointed.... ;)SpinningJennihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03565793575782127375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8347137515649920219.post-79558861444848573592011-04-17T12:59:41.376-07:002011-04-17T12:59:41.376-07:00I found the first chapter to be very informative-i...I found the first chapter to be very informative-it captured my interest right away. I hope there is some bloodshed and sex-that is always very interesting!! Great job!Mary Regelenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8347137515649920219.post-81966874543043095552011-04-16T12:48:54.592-07:002011-04-16T12:48:54.592-07:00Thanks for the comments!
I do go more in depth wit...Thanks for the comments!<br />I do go more in depth with the ASP as the story progresses; I didn't want to bog down the first chapter with too many explanations. A couple other people had issues with the ASP name and I'll admit I've never been real crazy about it either. All I know is that governments love acronyms (FBI, CIA, NSA, FEMA, etc) so I was trying to keep it in that same vein.<br />And until I come up with a different name that I like enough, Jacob is staying...so just bear with me a while longer. :)SpinningJennihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03565793575782127375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8347137515649920219.post-76795643267987188252011-04-16T10:18:17.453-07:002011-04-16T10:18:17.453-07:00Wow, can't wait for the next chapter, can'...Wow, can't wait for the next chapter, can't wait to see this on the big Screen! Painted a brilliant picture! I want to know more about the characters!Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02626756120395053734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8347137515649920219.post-19399380080199634912011-04-15T22:38:19.749-07:002011-04-15T22:38:19.749-07:00The name has to go. Surprised you haven't done...The name has to go. Surprised you haven't done it yet!<br />I like the concept of Alliance of Supernatural Powers, but the name is kinda corny. Maybe something more dark and gloomy, gothic??<br />Also, maybe a little bit more depth would be interesting with the ASP. Talk about leaders of each faction, to put a face with the two sides. What event(s) that led to the alliance?<br /> Would add more content, and make for a great read I would think. Unless you do later, then great!<br />Interesting to see how you play off of Jade being the only female werewolf. It would be cool if you described where she was bit or something to give readers a better visual of what she looks like. It will be great to see where you lead this story of Jade's.<br />Great start.Bobby Warpainthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18294239061298298739noreply@blogger.com